Monday, May 7, 2012

Copy Edit the World

They spelled "Punched" "ounched," hilarious.
Put the period outside of parenthesis.


"...And people on stage look at you quizzically as though YOU'RE WAS an oddball." Just the wording of this sentence is awkward, take out was.

"...Last November THAN...." should be "that"

Simple mistake, didn't separate Brennan.Al-Qaida... should be a space.

Didn't separate "...United Nations."Ron Paul...." there should be a space of separation.

"Protection and enjoyment",  should be "Protection and enjoyment,".

They misspelled "Way" 
One of the best pizzas this place has to offer.

Really on TV... the Question mark should be within the Quotes

Monday, March 12, 2012

Word #7

Ruefully

“That’s true,” Ellsberg said ruefully in our conversation last week.


http://www.truth-out.org/supreme-court-likely-endorse-obamas-war-whistle-blowers/1331575921



adjective
expressing sorrow or regret, esp. when in a slightly humorous way


She gave a rueful grin. 

Mystery Person


As a person one would say he has come a long way. He grew up in an internment camp for the "protection of the country." He was able to make something of himself in Hollywood and have one of the best careers someone could ask for, spanning five decades. He has become one of the main pillars of support for the LGBT community. 

This man has had a big fight with one of old co-workers, even when he goes on radio shows they ask him how did it start and why hasn't it ended, no one will ever know.

He has just been recently married, they have been together now for more than 20 years, longer than most normal marriages. 

The life he has lived is anything but normal he has been making strides for every community he has been apart, including the Japanese community in which he is apart of.


http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/George_Takei

Monday, March 5, 2012

Word #6

Taxonomy

The first part of this article develops a taxonomy of prison and film metaphors.

http://web.ebscohost.com.libaccess.sjlibrary.org/ehost/delivery?sid=b4be2a14-52ec-4c20-b0bf-7213c5e82370%40sessionmgr14&vid=7&hid=17

Noun: a scheme of classification

All species belong a taxonomy for the sake of science.

Word #5

Heuristic

The following discussion of prison metaphors in film demonstrates the Heuristic value of these taxonomies with regard to the recipients quest for meaning.

http://web.ebscohost.com.libaccess.sjlibrary.org/ehost/delivery?sid=b4be2a14-52ec-4c20-b0bf-7213c5e82370%40sessionmgr14&vid=7&hid=17

Adjective: enabling a person to discover or learn something for themselves

The teacher ignored the question with a heuristic attitude .


Monday, February 20, 2012

Word #4

Austerity

Successive rounds of austerity measures, demanded by Greece's international creditors have failed to restore growth and have provoked clashes between protesters and police.


http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-europe-17092964


Noun: difficult economic conditions created by government measures to reduce a budget deficit, esp. by reducing public expenditure

Governments around the globe are creating Austerity measures, so they don't end up like Greece.

Monday, February 13, 2012

Word #3

Ethnographer

One man from our team, Sebastian Haraha, is an ethnographer who has come on this journey to pinpoint the exact locations of the Meakambut's caves with a global positioning system.

Noun: The scientific description of the customs of individual peoples and cultures.

In order for the world to learn other cultures we need ethnographers to explore the unexplored.

Blog # 4 NEWS

I read about a tribe in Papua New Guinea that is struggling to remain a tribe. When the crew first got to the tribe they saw a tribe member, who was going to die in a cave unless she got the medical care she needed as soon as possible. They told the reporting crew at first that they caught wild boar every week, while they were there no one received any meat at all. The leader then came to a reporter and told them that they haven't caught any boar in six months. While the crew went to the medical clinic to check up on the tribe member who was going to die the leader told the crew to pass on a word to the New Guinea Government "We, the Meakambut people, will give up hunting and always moving and living in the mountain caves if the government will give us a health clinic and a school, and two shovels and two axes, so we can build homes."


Interest Piece

The reason why I feel that this is news is because this was a tribe that has been around since the Spanish explorers they are slowly dwindling away and now they are at the point where they are willing to give up their culture. Missionaries came and taught them different things and the culture of the "best" civilization. There once were so many different types of people that you could go 20 miles and come across three different ones. I think it is so sad that we have basically forced this tribe of people to give up their culture so they can survive. It also shows how fast we have destroyed our earth that tribes that could have survived off the land can no longer do so.

A way we could localize this piece would be to compare them to the indigenous people of the bay area and see how they fared and what ways they could help.

Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Blog #3 Fly on the Wall

As I walk in I hear "Ring of Fire" by Johnny Cash pumping through speakers, peanut shells just thrown on the floor and a score of people rooting for the Lakers in the fourth quarter. I hand the security guard my ID and look to the right and see way more beer taps than I ever do anywhere else, anything I want I can see is on tap.

As I look around for my friends I hear groups of people talking about school, work, court, anything you could come up with you can hear about it here. As I find my friends a fight breaks out, not over anything serious but about where a couple can and can't stand. I just shake my head and move on and start talking to my friends.

As I look around and start absorbing what has become our favorite watering hole, I notice pictures of Costa Mesa, Newport Beach, and Huntington Beach from the 1960s, 70s and up until the 80s. These pictures make me feel really young, noticing all the different classic cars and the streets that I know present day versus the early days. Paying even more attention I notice a bomb right next to where we sit, we have been coming here since we were all 21 and we never noticed it one time. It has many peoples names on it like Dave, Phill, and others so we decide to add to the Bomb. My friend Andrew goes first and makes his name as obnoxious as can be then I add mine and both Eric and Dave put theirs down.

We sit down in the crammed booth catching up on time, we haven't seen each other in almost a year. As our conversation begins to die down we notice the thousands of bar taps on the ceiling of the bar, Andrew the craziest of all of us decides he is going to score one for remembering our time together. I play the lookout as Eric lifts Andrew on his shoulders and tries to balance but falls over and lands on the nearby pool table. After this event we call it a night and promise to have a bon fire at the beach the next night.

Blog #2 Favorite Writing

Edgar Alan Poe: The Raven

The reason why "The Raven" is my favorite writing is because Poe is writing about his lost love Lenore. The way he incorporates gods and goddesses from ancient Greek and Roman times. The use of the "Plutonian Shore," and "Pallas;" these two gods: Pluto, Roman underworld god, and Pallas, another name for Athena, the protector of Athens, are opposites. The use of great detail setting the scene of the characters chamber, making it feel like as if we are in the room with him. The description of the fire in the fireplace, makes you smell the burning wood, Poe engages the reader to use all five senses.

Just in general I have always liked Poe works, I'm not quite sure why, maybe it's because most of his stories are dark and show people in their true state. The way he can manipulate the characters minds kind of shows what type of things he had to grow up with in his own mind.

Tuesday, February 7, 2012

Word #2

Paramilitary

Martin Llanos, 44, is believed to be the head of a right-wing paramilitary group that refused to demobilise.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-latin-america-16920933

Noun:  an unofficial paramilitary organization.

The Vietnamese army used the help of paramilitaries to fight the American army.

About Me

Hello welcome to Anthony Ambriz's blog. You stumbled across a Marine Corps Vets page. I served from June 21, 2006 to January 6, 2012. I'm currently studying Public Relations at San Jose State University, and hopefully in time I can get my MBA. I have already accomplished one goal of mine, serving my country, and now its time for me to pursue my goal of becoming a scuba instructor, my love of the ocean and the animals that live in it need to be cared for.

In the complete future I want to be able to open a Scuba and Surf shop that entails multiple maritime activities. I want my stores name to come mind when anyone thinks whale watching or just going for a day cruise.

I have never been a big fan of reading, but when I do read I enjoy reading biographies of historical people  and people who overcame diversity, it helps me learn that no matter where you come from you can still succeed. 

Word #1

Porter

She was married to husband Walter, a railway Porter in 1920, for 50 years until his death in 1970.
http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/uknews/9066371/Last-surviving-veteran-of-First-World-War-dies-aged-110.html


Noun; a person employed to carry luggage and other loads, esp. in a railroad station, airport, or hotel.

The Porter grabbed an extra bag to help the couple to their room.