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| They spelled "Punched" "ounched," hilarious. |
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| Put the period outside of parenthesis. |
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| "...And people on stage look at you quizzically as though YOU'RE WAS an oddball." Just the wording of this sentence is awkward, take out was. |
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| "...Last November THAN...." should be "that" |
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| Simple mistake, didn't separate Brennan.Al-Qaida... should be a space. |
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| Didn't separate "...United Nations."Ron Paul...." there should be a space of separation. |
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| "Protection and enjoyment", should be "Protection and enjoyment,". |
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| They misspelled "Way" |
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| One of the best pizzas this place has to offer. |
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| Really on TV... the Question mark should be within the Quotes |
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ReplyDeleteThat pizza typo is a real doozie!